Found some motivation to keep working on this story for the moment, which has been a bit hard. I've looked back at it so many times, but redrawing something that was written by someone else (something that I love) I realized that my storytelling and writing aren't nearly as good as said person. But I was quite pleased with this page, and that can be motivating. (as well as music)
Of course, it loses that striking imagery that you often get in single illustrations, and people will spend a lot less time looking at the drawings, but I would prefer that people get absorbed by the story and feel the emotions with the characters.